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sukai-yume, November 21st, 2010, 6:52 pm ( Reply )

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Thanks issy for helping with the german, it was a right bugger.

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Oh, Anika is cute! And poor Giovanni *ahem* Luca for having his glasses made fun of.

There's still a thing or two not quite right with the German. I can help you a bit if you want to.

posted by Glueckskeks on November 22nd, 2010, 2:00 am





 
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I'm putting myself on the line here, but I loved how I could understand the bits of German before reading the translations ; w;

Also, Luca is an adorable little bunny Poor Al ; w;

posted by MemaiShirosaki on November 22nd, 2010, 2:03 am





 
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Oh man I love how the kids literally made every sarcastic comment that I would have put here this page is genius!! XDD I love how Luca just sorta stands about being spare whilst all this happens, what a bro. Oh Barbera you so bitter 'bout life *dohohoho face*

posted by Caspian on November 22nd, 2010, 3:08 am



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Aw the German still isn't right? Buggerations. Oh well, we tried our best. And bro, panel 5? Can't say that I didn't laugh. A lot. And not just about the wedding thing. Though Cris should lay off about the email thing, Al uses Twitter fairly well. And panel 7, despite the fact that you claimed it was an 'over the shoulder pedo' shot, still came out beautiful and Lu trying to get a word in at the end? I LOVE HIM SO MUCH WORDS CAN'T EVEN- Ahem, yes. Your number one fan since forever bro <3

posted by Issy couldn't think of a name (Guest) on November 22nd, 2010, 7:33 am



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lol. she's a charmer.

posted by RibbonBun on November 22nd, 2010, 12:48 pm





 
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Oh cool, I wondered about that since the "Adopting all these others but not paying attention to me" thing. But I thought I'd gotten the wrong end of the stock because Al can't have kids anymore.

posted by Smack Santa on November 23rd, 2010, 1:37 am





 
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ack, sorry for taking that long with replying.
So, first of all, you should replace "aussehen" with "aussieht". I can see where that came from, of course, but glasses are singular in German. (confusing, right?) I'm also pretty sure you write "dass" like this. (We've had too many spelling reforms lately).

In the third panel, Al should say "Du musst dich entschuldigen!" instead. "Sie" is way too formal when talking to a child. Personally, I would prefer if he simply said "Entschuldige dich!" (basically "Apologize!") because that's what you would rather say in Germany, but both is correct.
The other speech bubble is totally fine, I would maybe cut out the "sehr" because I think that's unecessary. That's just my personal opinion, though. Keep it in if you want to.

I hope that helped a bit!

posted by Glueckskeks on December 4th, 2010, 2:18 am





 
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OMG German!
I speak that language!
XDD
I actually really like Faith

posted by Hyli_Tuben_Mechanic on December 12th, 2010, 8:59 pm



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