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sukai-yume, August 14th, 2011, 5:24 pm ( Reply )

- I'm getting someone to proof read my pages now. I feel like such a child though since it makes it seem as though my obvious typing errors are actually me being to stupid to put an apostrophe in the right place. Its been a real sliiiccceeeee... beleive me, just wonderful.

Thanks for everyones continued support I still very much appreciate it!

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First comment. Liking the page and Al's serious-face, he looks like a teacher. Actually, I wonder what his day job might be apart from the shop, if he has one. He seems like a social worker.

By the way, well done to whoever is proofreading for you, and there's nought wrong with needing some help. We all mess up the odd bit of grammar now and then, it's nothing to kick yourself over.

posted by avian-reader on August 14th, 2011, 5:28 pm





 
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Your not stupid. You were never stupid. You wont continue to be stupid. Stop it.

THIS PAGE IS AMAAAZZZINGGG as usual, of course. I love how Al is so demandingly caring 'HOW DARE YOU SLEEP ON THE STREET GETINMYHOUSEIMMEDIATLEY' And awman bless little Lu! He better not go back! *puts on badass shades* He still has unfinished buisness here.

Yes Avian I see you down there and i'm waaaatching youuu. Ahh not really! Glad thier someone who loves RDE as much as me! *brofist*

EDIT: I forgot how the commenting works. I SEE YOU UP THERE I MEAN! Yeah...

posted by Caspian on August 14th, 2011, 6:03 pm





 
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he's going to seriously question those parents, as to why they didn't keep in touch with him, why they didn't know their son was straying around and why they didn't fetch him back.

posted by Raichi on August 15th, 2011, 12:18 pm



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Someone eh? SOMEONE. WELL, I NEVER. Just a someone eh, well, THEY MUST BE PREEETTY MAGICAL. I'll just be over here, dragging my proof reading machine with me.

Disclaimer: I do not own a proof reading machine and if I did, then it would be too big to drag.

In future, you will credit me as IssynyannyannyanIssynyannyannyannyan. In fact, change the name of this comic to the above immediately.

Now that the important business is out of the way, good job on your pageee~ Look at Luca being all coy in the 4th panel. With good reason too. He didn't eat that last bit of lettuce. Screw the whole 'leaving him behind' plot, his parents' never taught him to eat his greens and that is a lot more serious in my book.

(I like the sound of this bed Al's on about, is he letting out rooms? He can read me bed time stories and tuck me in any day. I demand to be read the Frujji Pruto. At once.)

posted by IssyCouldn'tThinkOfAName on August 15th, 2011, 1:20 pm





 
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Most of the time. Pssh.

posted by pwii on August 23rd, 2011, 12:25 am



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