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sukai-yume, August 9th, 2010, 5:57 pm ( Reply )

- Ill just leave this here for you to figgure out. XD Im not hugely pleased with the layout of this page but I think it does the whole first person thing I was looking for. *sigh* the art looks so odd when its blurred.

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Thanks for all the comments! *sob* Oh and special thanks to Krazy, you draw my characters better than I do.

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Little FYI: you have two s's in aside in the second paragraph.

But, oooh. Alastair! I'm dying to know what's going on!

posted by boldwager on August 9th, 2010, 6:28 pm





 
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Haha. You also have two r's in arround in the first paragraph. XD Lovely page, by the way.

posted by Chasyn on August 9th, 2010, 7:29 pm





 
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you do add double letters a lot you know XD
I blame it on the English language--words are rarely spelled simply so then you get into the habit of over-correcting and spelling words more complicated than they actually are! (though English is useful for expressing many complex ideas so maybe it is redeemed ;P)

oh and er great page! *hasn't read it all yet* >.>

posted by margiepeace08 on August 10th, 2010, 1:16 am





 
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;w; Alastair ;w;;

posted by xkrazydog on August 10th, 2010, 9:46 am



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I like the part where it was blurry. Reminded me of my drunken night with you.

posted by Luke Forres (Guest) on August 11th, 2010, 4:03 am



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